That’s fine if that’s what you were going for, but then it should be written as “Trying not to scream while watching a right-wing man kill another right-wing man at a right-wing event at a right wing college- etc.” Then the bottom text could read “While they blame left-wing extremism.”
The current formatting makes it look like the kid is somehow the one angry at left wing extremists.
That’s fine if that’s what you were going for, but then it should be written as “Trying not to scream while watching a right-wing man kill another right-wing man at a right-wing event at a right wing college- etc.” Then the bottom text could read “While they blame left-wing extremism.”
The current formatting makes it look like the kid is somehow the one angry at left wing extremists.
It’s not a big deal, but worth pointing out imo.
Cheers!